Improve message 'How does the producer...'

owid · Jun 5, 2024 · 1c16a77 · 1c16a77
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diff --git a/packages/@ourworldindata/grapher/src/modal/SourcesDescriptions.tsx b/packages/@ourworldindata/grapher/src/modal/SourcesDescriptions.tsx
@@ -60,8 +60,8 @@ export const SourcesDescriptions = (props: SourcesDescriptionsProps) => {
                     <ExpandableToggle
                         label={
                             props.attributionShort
-                                ? `How does the producer of this data - ${props.attributionShort} - describe this data?`
-                                : "How does the producer of this data describe this data?"
+                                ? `How is this data described by its producer - ${props.attributionShort}?`
+                                : "How is this data described by its producer?"
                         }
                         content={
                             <SimpleMarkdownText

diff --git a/site/DataPageV2Content.tsx b/site/DataPageV2Content.tsx
@@ -367,8 +367,8 @@ export const DataPageV2Content = ({
                                                         <ExpandableToggle
                                                             label={
                                                                 datapageData.attributionShort
-                                                                    ? `How does the producer of this data - ${datapageData.attributionShort} - describe this data?`
-                                                                    : "How does the producer of this data describe this data?"
+                                                                    ? `How is this data described by its producer - ${datapageData.attributionShort}?`
+                                                                    : "How is this data described by its producer?"
                                                             }
                                                             content={
                                                                 <div className="article-block__text">