Revise wording to make each definition more clear. Also remove the ex…

…tra components under software system.

Signed-off-by: Dan Garfield <dan@todaywasawesome.com>

GLOSSARY.md

@@ -4,39 +4,37 @@ This glossary accompanies the [GitOps Principles](./PRINCIPLES.md), and other su
 
 - ## Continuous
 
-    By "continuous" we adopt the industry standard to mean that [reconciliation](#reconciliation) continues to happen, not that it must be instantaneous.
+    "Continuous" is intended to match the industry standard term: [reconciliation](#reconciliation) continues to happen, not that it must be instantaneous.
 
 - ## Declarative Description
 
-    Describing the desired state or behavior of a system without specifying how that state will be achieved, thereby separating configuration (the desired state) from the implementation (commands, API calls, scripts etc.) that actually achieves the desired state described in the declarative description.
+    A configuration that describes the desired operating state of a system without specifying procedures for how that state will be acheived. This separates configuration (the desired state) from the implementation (commands, API calls, scripts etc.) used to achieve that state.
 
 - ## Desired State
 
-    The aggregate of all configuration data for a system form its desired state which is defined as data sufficient to recreate the system so that instances of the system are behaviourally indistinguishable, but do not include the state of any data stored within the system, eg. database contents.
+    The aggregate of all configiuration data needed to start, bootstrap, recreate, run, and recover a system. This does not include data stored within a system, eg. database contents.
 
 - ## Drift
 
-    When a system's actual state changes for any reason other than its versioned [desired state](#desired-state) declarations having changed, we say that the system has drifted from its desired state.
+    When a system's actual state changes for any reason other than its [desired state](#desired-state)declarations having changed. When this occurs, the system has drifted from its desired state.
 
 - ## Reconciliation
 
-    The process of ensuring that the actual state of a system matches its [desired state](#desired-state) declarations.
-    Contrary to CIops, any divergence between the two will trigger reconciliation, regardless of where changes occured.
+    The process of ensuring the actual state of a system matches its [desired state](#desired-state) declarations.
+    Contrary to "CIops", any divergence between the two will trigger reconciliation, regardless of where changes occured.
     Divergence could be due to the actual state unintentionally [drifting](#drift) from the desired state declarations, or a new desired state declaration version having been changed intentionally.
 
 - ## Software System
 
-  We currently understand a software system to include:
+    A software system managed by GitOps includes:
 
-  - One or more runtime environments consisting of resources under management
-  - In each runtime, the management agents which act on resources according to security policies
-  - One or more software repositories for storing deployable artifacts that may be loaded into the runtime environments, eg. configuration files, code, binaries, and packages
-  - One or more Administrators who are responsible for operating the runtime environments ie. installing, starting, stopping and updating software, code, configuration, etc
-  - A set of policies controlling access and management of repositories, deployments, runtimes
+    1. One or more runtime environments consisting of resources under management
+    1. The management agents within each runtime
+    1. Policies for controlling access and management of repositories, deployments, runtimes
 
 - ## State Store
 
     A system for storing immutable versions of [desired state](#desired-state) declarations.
     This state store should provide access control and auditing on the changes to the Desired State.
     Git, from which GitOps derives its name, is the canonical example used as this state store but any other system that meets these criteria may be used.
-    In all cases, these state stores must be properly configured and special precautions must be taken to comply with requirements set out in the GitOps Principles.
+    In all cases, these state stores must be properly configured and precautions must be taken to comply with requirements set out in the GitOps Principles.