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diff --git a/docs/odata-csdl-json/odata-csdl-json.html b/docs/odata-csdl-json/odata-csdl-json.html
@@ -2442,7 +2442,7 @@ <h3 id="1422-target"><a name="Target" href="#Target">14.2.2 Target</a></h3>
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-<p>A binding parameter is “addressed via a resource path” if the path expression addressing the binding parameter starts with the resource path, it may then continue with segments described in <a href="#ODataURL">OData-URL</a>, sections 4.6 through 4.12. If the given path addresses a collection, the binding parameter can also be a single instance of that collection (see <a href="#ODataURL">OData-URL</a>, sections 4.9 and 4.10).</p>
+<p>A binding parameter is “addressed via a resource path” if the path expression addressing the binding parameter starts with the resource path, it may then continue with segments described in <a href="#ODataURL">OData-URL</a>, sections 4.6 through 4.12. If the resource path addresses a collection, the binding parameter can also be a single instance of that collection if a segment described in <a href="#ODataURL">OData-URL</a>, sections 4.9 and 4.10, follows.</p>
 <p>The second path expression references one of the following model elements:</p>
 <ul>
 <li>Action overload</li>

diff --git a/docs/odata-csdl-json/odata-csdl-json.md b/docs/odata-csdl-json/odata-csdl-json.md
@@ -3893,9 +3893,9 @@ Entity Type|an instance or collection of the type or a subtype thereof
 
 A binding parameter is "addressed via a resource path" if the path expression addressing the
 binding parameter starts with the resource path, it may then continue with segments
-described in [OData-URL](#ODataURL), sections 4.6 through 4.12. If the given path
+described in [OData-URL](#ODataURL), sections 4.6 through 4.12. If the resource path
 addresses a collection, the binding parameter can also be a single instance of that
-collection (see [OData-URL](#ODataURL), sections 4.9 and 4.10).
+collection if a segment described in [OData-URL](#ODataURL), sections 4.9 and 4.10, follows.
 
 The second path expression references one of the following model elements:
 - Action overload

diff --git a/docs/odata-csdl-xml/odata-csdl-xml.html b/docs/odata-csdl-xml/odata-csdl-xml.html
@@ -2258,7 +2258,7 @@ <h3 id="1422-target"><a name="Target" href="#Target">14.2.2 Target</a></h3>
 </tr>
 </tbody>
 </table>
-<p>A binding parameter is “addressed via a resource path” if the path expression addressing the binding parameter starts with the resource path, it may then continue with segments described in <a href="#ODataURL">OData-URL</a>, sections 4.6 through 4.12. If the given path addresses a collection, the binding parameter can also be a single instance of that collection (see <a href="#ODataURL">OData-URL</a>, sections 4.9 and 4.10).</p>
+<p>A binding parameter is “addressed via a resource path” if the path expression addressing the binding parameter starts with the resource path, it may then continue with segments described in <a href="#ODataURL">OData-URL</a>, sections 4.6 through 4.12. If the resource path addresses a collection, the binding parameter can also be a single instance of that collection if a segment described in <a href="#ODataURL">OData-URL</a>, sections 4.9 and 4.10, follows.</p>
 <p>The second path expression references one of the following model elements:</p>
 <ul>
 <li>Action overload</li>

diff --git a/docs/odata-csdl-xml/odata-csdl-xml.md b/docs/odata-csdl-xml/odata-csdl-xml.md
@@ -3706,9 +3706,9 @@ Entity Type|an instance or collection of the type or a subtype thereof
 
 A binding parameter is "addressed via a resource path" if the path expression addressing the
 binding parameter starts with the resource path, it may then continue with segments
-described in [OData-URL](#ODataURL), sections 4.6 through 4.12. If the given path
+described in [OData-URL](#ODataURL), sections 4.6 through 4.12. If the resource path
 addresses a collection, the binding parameter can also be a single instance of that
-collection (see [OData-URL](#ODataURL), sections 4.9 and 4.10).
+collection if a segment described in [OData-URL](#ODataURL), sections 4.9 and 4.10, follows.
 
 The second path expression references one of the following model elements:
 - Action overload

diff --git a/odata-csdl/14 Vocabulary and Annotation.md b/odata-csdl/14 Vocabulary and Annotation.md
@@ -694,9 +694,9 @@ Entity Type|an instance or collection of the type or a subtype thereof
 
 A binding parameter is "addressed via a resource path" if the path expression addressing the
 binding parameter starts with the resource path, it may then continue with segments
-described in [OData-URL](#ODataURL), sections 4.6 through 4.12. If the given path
+described in [OData-URL](#ODataURL), sections 4.6 through 4.12. If the resource path
 addresses a collection, the binding parameter can also be a single instance of that
-collection (see [OData-URL](#ODataURL), sections 4.9 and 4.10).
+collection if a segment described in [OData-URL](#ODataURL), sections 4.9 and 4.10, follows.
 
 The second path expression references one of the following model elements:
 - Action overload