Copy changes - survey page, media, training and events

app/views/pages/events.html.haml

@@ -24,7 +24,10 @@
   Our training sessions are getting incredible feedback, with 
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     over 90% of recent participants rating our training as "good" or "excellent",
-  and the same number saying they will behave differently as a direct result of this training. Book your place today!
+  and saying they will do things differently as a direct result of this training. 
+%p  
+  %b
+    The next session is 5pm-7pm on Thursday 26th April 2012. Book your place today!
 
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   <div style="width:100%; text-align:left;" ><iframe  src="http://www.eventbrite.co.uk/tickets-external?eid=3184674447&ref=etckt" frameborder="0" height="192" width="100%" vspace="0" hspace="0" marginheight="5" marginwidth="5" scrolling="auto" allowtransparency="true"></iframe><div style="font-family:Helvetica, Arial; font-size:10px; padding:5px 0 5px; margin:2px; width:100%; text-align:left;" ><a style="color:#ddd; text-decoration:none;" target="_blank" href="http://www.eventbrite.co.uk/r/etckt" >Event Registration Online</a><span style="color:#ddd;" > for </span><a style="color:#ddd; text-decoration:none;" target="_blank" href="http://yourmind.eventbrite.co.uk?ref=etckt" >Your Mind: A User's Guide</a><span style="color:#ddd;" > powered by </span><a style="color:#ddd; text-decoration:none;" target="_blank" href="http://www.eventbrite.co.uk?ref=etckt" >Eventbrite</a></div></div>

app/views/pages/media.html.haml

@@ -6,6 +6,11 @@
   = link_to('press@mindapples.org', 'mailto:press@mindapples.org') + "."
 
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+    “As neuroscience and psychology reveal more about how our minds work, we think huge progress can be made through basic mental health literacy training.”
+    %br
+    %a{:href => "http://www.guardian.co.uk/healthcare-network/2012/apr/04/mental-health-five-a-day-campaign", :target => "_blank", :title => "Andy Gibson on Mindapples in Guardian Healthcare"} Andy Gibson, The Guardian, April 2012
+    %br
+    %br
     “So one of my manic to-do lists leads me to mindapples.org to find out more about getting a mental five-a-day... I compile my own five-a-day - among them spending a few minutes looking after the plants in my garden and taking a 15-minute cycle around my local common - and I realise that while doing them may not make that bubbling undercurrent of anxiety disappear, it does subside. I feel less useless, more capable. I even get more done. I vow to incorporate more calming diversions into my day. Old habits die hard, but an anxiety addict has to start somewhere...”
     %br
     Kathryn Knight, Grazia, October 2011 (print only though, sorry)

app/views/pages/survey.html.haml

@@ -1,10 +1,4 @@
-%h1
-  Take our survey!
-
-%p
-  We want to know more about our attitudes to mental health, and our knowledge about how to look after our minds. Please help our research by taking a minute or two to complete the questions below.
-
-<script type="text/javascript">var host = (("https:" == document.location.protocol) ? "https://secure." : "http://");document.write(unescape("%3Cscript src='" + host + "wufoo.com/scripts/embed/form.js' type='text/javascript'%3E%3C/script%3E"));</script>
+<script type="text/javascript">var host = (("https:" == document.location.protocol) ? "https://secure." : "http://");document.write(unescape("%3Cscript src='" + host + "wufoo.com/scripts/embed/form.js' type='text/javascript'%3E%3C/script%3E"));</script>
 
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@@ -18,5 +12,7 @@ r7x2x3.display();
 </script>
 
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-  Your responses will be used anonymously by Mindapples and our academic partners to evaluate the impact of our work. We will never make your email address public, or give away your identity. For more information on how we use and store data, please refer to our
+  Your responses will be used anonymously by Mindapples and our 
+  = link_to('academic partners', partnerships_path) 
+  to evaluate the impact of our work. For more information on how we use and store data, please refer to our
   = link_to('Privacy Policy', privacy_path) + "."

app/views/pages/training.html.haml

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
 
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-    For details of the next taster session, and to book your place, 
+    For details of the next taster session, and to book your seat, 
     = link_to('visit our events page', events_path) + "." 
 
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app/views/pages/yourmind.html.haml

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
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   %i
     Your Mind: A User's Guide
-  is a new training programme designed to give you the practical knowledge you need to manage your mind better. Each month, we introduce you to a new set of eye-opening knowledge about how your mind works, and over the month you use our reflective learning tools to apply it to your life and work. By the end of the 9-month programme, you will understand your mind better, and have an array of practical techniques to increase your resilience and mental performance. This is low-contact, high-impact training designed for busy people who want to manage themselves and others better.
+  is a new training programme designed to give you the practical knowledge you need to understand your mind. Each month, we introduce you to a new set of eye-opening knowledge about how your mind works, and you use our reflective learning tools to apply this knowledge to your life and work. By the end of the 9-month programme, you will know more about your mind, and have an array of practical techniques to increase your resilience and mental performance. This is low-contact, high-impact training designed for busy people who want to manage themselves and others better.
 
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   Our training sessions are getting incredible feedback, with 
@@ -23,10 +23,14 @@
     Dr David Matthews, MB, BS, DRCOG, DOccMed, AFOM, FRCGP, Occupational Physician
 
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-  The best way to experience the power and impact of the programme is to attend one of our monthly taster sessions, held in the deluxe training centre in our new home at the Exchange in London Bridge. Book your place today!
+  The best way to experience the power and impact of our training is to attend one of our occasional taster sessions.
+
+%p  
+  %b
+    The next session is 5pm-7pm on Thursday 26th April 2012, in the Exchange in London Bridge. Book your place today!
 
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-  <div style="width:100%; text-align:left;" ><iframe  src="http://www.eventbrite.co.uk/tickets-external?eid=3184674447&ref=etckt" frameborder="0" height="192" width="100%" vspace="0" hspace="0" marginheight="5" marginwidth="5" scrolling="auto" allowtransparency="true"></iframe><div style="font-family:Helvetica, Arial; font-size:10px; padding:5px 0 5px; margin:2px; width:100%; text-align:left;" ><a style="color:#ddd; text-decoration:none;" target="_blank" href="http://www.eventbrite.co.uk/r/etckt" >Event Registration Online</a><span style="color:#ddd;" > for </span><a style="color:#ddd; text-decoration:none;" target="_blank" href="http://yourmind.eventbrite.co.uk?ref=etckt" >Your Mind: A User's Guide</a><span style="color:#ddd;" > powered by </span><a style="color:#ddd; text-decoration:none;" target="_blank" href="http://www.eventbrite.co.uk?ref=etckt" >Eventbrite</a></div></div>
+  <div style="width:100%; text-align:left;" ><iframe  src="http://www.eventbrite.co.uk/tickets-external?eid=3184674447&ref=etckt" frameborder="0" height="222" width="100%" vspace="0" hspace="0" marginheight="5" marginwidth="5" scrolling="auto" allowtransparency="true"></iframe><div style="font-family:Helvetica, Arial; font-size:10px; padding:5px 0 5px; margin:2px; width:100%; text-align:left;" ><a style="color:#ddd; text-decoration:none;" target="_blank" href="http://www.eventbrite.co.uk/r/etckt" >Event Registration Online</a><span style="color:#ddd;" > for </span><a style="color:#ddd; text-decoration:none;" target="_blank" href="http://yourmind.eventbrite.co.uk?ref=etckt" >Your Mind: A User's Guide</a><span style="color:#ddd;" > powered by </span><a style="color:#ddd; text-decoration:none;" target="_blank" href="http://www.eventbrite.co.uk?ref=etckt" >Eventbrite</a></div></div>
 
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