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product_docs/docs/epas/13/epas_guide/14_edb_clone_schema.mdx

@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ After creating the extensions, to create the log directory, execute the followin
   SELECT edb_util.create_clone_log_dir();
   ```
 
-When successful, command returns `true`.
+When successful, the command returns `true`.
 
 ### Creating the Foreign Servers and User Mappings
 
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ The user mapping defines the connection and authentication information for the f
 
 **This foreign server and user mapping must be created within the database of the local server in which the cloning is to occur.**
 
-**When invoking an EDB Clone Schema function, the database user for whom the user mapping is defined must have the required privileges and be connected to the local server .**
+**When invoking an EDB Clone Schema function, the database user for whom the user mapping is defined must have the required privileges and be connected to the local server.**
 
 The following example creates the foreign server for the database containing the schema to be cloned, and to receive the cloned schema as well.
 
@@ -307,7 +307,7 @@ The user mappings define the connection and authentication information for the f
 
 **All of these foreign servers and user mappings must be created within the target database of the target/local server.**
 
-**When invoking an EDB Clone Schema function, the database user for whom the user mappings are defined must have the required privileges and be connected to the local server .**
+**When invoking an EDB Clone Schema function, the database user for whom the user mappings are defined must have the required privileges and be connected to the local server.**
 
 The following example creates the foreign server for the local target database that is to receive the cloned schema.
 
@@ -1163,7 +1163,7 @@ INFO:  Executed command: GRANT USAGE ON FOREIGN DATA WRAPPER postgres_fdw TO "ec
 
 ### REVOKE_CLONE_SCHEMA_PRIVILEGES
 
-You can revoke the clone schema privileges from a non-superuser using this function.
+This function revokes the clone schema privileges from a non-superuser.
 
 Syntax:
 
@@ -1219,7 +1219,7 @@ __OUTPUT__
 CREATE ROLE
 ```
 
-Give CREATE privileges  on the `edb` database to `forcs`:
+Give CREATE privileges on the `edb` database to `forcs`:
 
 ```sql
 GRANT CREATE on DATABASE edb to forcs;

product_docs/docs/epas/14/epas_guide/14_edb_clone_schema.mdx

@@ -1120,7 +1120,7 @@ INFO:  Executed command: GRANT USAGE ON FOREIGN DATA WRAPPER postgres_fdw TO "ec
 
 ### REVOKE_CLONE_SCHEMA_PRIVILEGES
 
-You can revoke the clone schema privileges from a non-superuser using this function.
+This function revokes the clone schema privileges from a non-superuser.
 
 Syntax:
 
@@ -1176,7 +1176,7 @@ __OUTPUT__
 CREATE ROLE
 ```
 
-Give CREATE privileges  on the `edb` database to `forcs`:
+Give CREATE privileges on the `edb` database to `forcs`:
 
 ```sql
 GRANT CREATE on DATABASE edb to forcs;

product_docs/docs/epas/15/database_administration/14_edb_clone_schema/cloning_with_a_non_super_user.mdx

@@ -2,10 +2,9 @@
 title: Cloning schema as a non-superuser
 ---
 
-## Cloning schema as a non-superuser
-
 You can clone the schema as a non-superuser. These two functions are created while creating the extension:
 
+
 - `GRANT_CLONE_SCHEMA_PRIVILEGES` — Grants the privileges to clone the schema to a non-superuser.
 - `REVOKE_CLONE_SCHEMA_PRIVILEGES` — Revokes the privileges to clone the schema from a non-superuser.
 
@@ -59,7 +58,7 @@ INFO:  Executed command: GRANT USAGE ON FOREIGN DATA WRAPPER postgres_fdw TO "ec
 
 ### REVOKE_CLONE_SCHEMA_PRIVILEGES
 
-You can revoke the clone schema privileges from a non-superuser using this function.
+This function revokes the clone schema privileges from a non-superuser.
 
 Syntax:
 
@@ -115,7 +114,7 @@ __OUTPUT__
 CREATE ROLE
 ```
 
-Give CREATE privileges  on the `edb` database to `forcs`:
+Give CREATE privileges on the `edb` database to `forcs`:
 
 ```sql
 GRANT CREATE on DATABASE edb to forcs;

product_docs/docs/epas/16/database_administration/14_edb_clone_schema/cloning_with_a_non_super_user.mdx

@@ -2,7 +2,6 @@
 title: Cloning schema as a non-superuser
 ---
 
-## Cloning schema as a non-superuser
 
 You can clone the schema as a non-superuser. These two functions are created while creating the extension:
 
@@ -59,7 +58,7 @@ INFO:  Executed command: GRANT USAGE ON FOREIGN DATA WRAPPER postgres_fdw TO "ec
 
 ### REVOKE_CLONE_SCHEMA_PRIVILEGES
 
-You can revoke the clone schema privileges from a non-superuser using this function.
+This function revokes the clone schema privileges from a non-superuser.
 
 Syntax:
 
@@ -115,7 +114,7 @@ __OUTPUT__
 CREATE ROLE
 ```
 
-Give CREATE privileges  on the `edb` database to `forcs`:
+Give CREATE privileges on the `edb` database to `forcs`:
 
 ```sql
 GRANT CREATE on DATABASE edb to forcs;

product_docs/docs/epas/17/database_administration/14_edb_clone_schema/cloning_with_non_super_user.mdx

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ You can clone the schema as a non-superuser. These two functions are created whi
 - `GRANT_CLONE_SCHEMA_PRIVILEGES` — Grants the privileges to clone the schema to a non-superuser.
 - `REVOKE_CLONE_SCHEMA_PRIVILEGES` — Revokes the privileges to clone the schema from a non-superuser.
 
-### GRANT_CLONE_SCHEMA_PRIVILEGES
+## GRANT_CLONE_SCHEMA_PRIVILEGES
 
 This function grants the clone schema privileges to a non-superuser.
 
@@ -55,9 +55,9 @@ INFO:  Executed command: GRANT USAGE ON FOREIGN DATA WRAPPER postgres_fdw TO "ec
 (1 row)
 ```
 
-### REVOKE_CLONE_SCHEMA_PRIVILEGES
+## REVOKE_CLONE_SCHEMA_PRIVILEGES
 
-You can revoke the clone schema privileges from a non-superuser using this function.
+This function revokes the clone schema privileges from a non-superuser.
 
 Syntax:
 
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ __OUTPUT__
 CREATE ROLE
 ```
 
-Give CREATE privileges  on the `edb` database to `forcs`:
+Give CREATE privileges on the `edb` database to `forcs`:
 
 ```sql
 GRANT CREATE on DATABASE edb to forcs;
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ __OUTPUT__
 CREATE ROLE
 ```
 
-Give CREATE privileges  on the `edb` database to `forcs`:
+Give CREATE privileges on the `edb` database to `forcs`:
 
 ```sql
 GRANT CREATE on DATABASE edb to forcs;

product_docs/docs/epas/17/database_administration/14_edb_clone_schema/setting_up_edb_clone_schema.mdx

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Modify the `postgresql.conf` file by adding `$libdir/parallel_clone` and `$libdi
   shared_preload_libraries = '$libdir/dbms_pipe,$libdir/dbms_aq,$libdir/parallel_clone,$libdir/edb_job_scheduler'
   ```
 
-To have the changes take effect, restart the database server.
+For the changes to take effect, you must restart the database server.
 
 ## Installing PL/Perl